Does Your Copy Speak to Your Pet Industry Audience?

The written word is still one of the most effective ways to reach customers. However, there is a lot of material out there, both online and offline. In the pet and veterinary industries, your audience is bombarded with ads, articles, and emails every day. It’s a real challenge to not only capture attention, but maintain it.

So what is the first step to creating copy that will engage your audience? To begin with, it’s important to consider exactly who your customer is.

This helps you determine how much jargon to use. In the B2B (business-to-business) pet or veterinary industry, it’s acceptable to use jargon. The customers in your industry like to know that you understand them. Speaking the same language goes a long way toward establishing trust.

For businesses marketing to veterinary hospitals, this could mean not only understanding the lingo and medical speak, but also keeping up to date on the latest trends and issues in the industry. Presenting evidence-based materials is also important.

On the other hand, this might not work quite as well for B2C (business-to-consumer), such as for a kennel or dog groomer, or other pet business that markets directly to pet owners. That’s not to say that consumers don’t understand the jargon. It’s just to say that a casual, conversational tone can be more effective.

This could mean painting a picture rather than presenting heaps of research studies. Of course, it’s important to provide facts and evidence… but remember to also emphasize the emotional benefits of your product or service. For example, will it save your customer (a busy pet owner who works full time and takes care of a family, for example) time and money? Will it be convenient for them and make their life easier?

In both scenarios, testimonials and case studies can go a long way toward building trust, too. It’s always helpful to see that others have benefited from your product or service.

Another interesting point to note: even though B2B uses more jargon and technical language than does B2C, in both scenarios it’s best to keep the materials at a lower reading level. Many experts recommend keeping all sales copy at an 8th grade reading level or lower.

That’s not to say that your audience isn’t capable of reading above that level. Obviously, there’s a good chance that much of your audience is intelligent and highly educated.

However, there’s something comfortable and relatable about a casual style of speaking. Clarity is very valuable when it comes to communicating with your customers – often, the simplest message is the most effective message.


Ready to work with a web content specialist who can help you create clear, engaging content? Contact Dr. Tammy at drtammy@petcopywriter[dot]com for a consultation on your website or project.